February 24, 2013
Don't be Beguiled by Orwell: Using Plain and Clear Language is Not Always a Moral Virtue
Ed Smith in The New Statesman:
Orwell season has led me back to his famous essay “Politics and the English Language”, first published in 1946. It is written with enviable clarity. But is it true? Orwell argues that “the great enemy of clear language is insincerity. When there is a gap between one’s real and one’s declared aims, one turns as it were instinctively to long words.”
I suspect the opposite is now true. When politicians or corporate front men have to bridge a gap between what they are saying and what they know to be true, their preferred technique is to convey authenticity by speaking with misleading simplicity. The ubiquitous injunction “Let’s be clear”, followed by a list of five bogus bullet-points, is a much more common refuge than the Latinate diction and Byzantine sentence structure that Orwell deplored.
We live in a self-consciously plain-spoken political era. But Orwell’s advice, ironically, has not elevated the substance of debate; it has merely helped the political class to avoid the subject more skilfully. The art of spin is not (quite) supplanting truth with lies. It aspires to replace awkward complexities with catchy simplicity. Successful spin does not leave the effect of skilful persuasiveness; it creates the impression of unavoidable common sense. Hence the artifice becomes invisible – just as a truly charming person is considered nice rather than “charming”.
There is a new puritanism about the way we use words, as though someone with a broad vocabulary or the ability to sustain a complex sentence is innately untrustworthy. Out with mandarin obfuscation and donnish paradoxes, in with lists and bullet points. But one method of avoiding awkward truths has been replaced by another. The political class now speaks as it dresses: in matt navy suits and open-necked white shirts. Elaborate adjectives have suffered the same fate as flowery ties. But this is not moral progress, it is just fashion.
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Comments
I think Orwell was talking about rational persuasion. This article appears to be about advertising "spin". Spin, like all advertising, is designed to pull emotional strings. Its not designed to help bring anyone to rational agreement.
Posted by: Ross Williams | Feb 24, 2013 6:51:49 PM
Personally I find Obama's "let's be clear" preferable to the jibberish dished out by his predecessor.
Posted by: E N | Feb 24, 2013 7:50:08 PM
That's kind of an odd critique of Orwell considering 1984's Newspeak consisted largely of eliminating words from the language altogether...
Posted by: Brian | Feb 25, 2013 1:34:03 PM
Orwell coined a great phrase: "The Bully Religion."
He said it was a universal phenomenon.
His observation was and still is spot on.
Posted by: Dredd | Feb 25, 2013 3:52:20 PM
A few comments :
1. I believe that Orwell was mistaken about a number of things in this article of his. It is one thing to advocate for a particular style of writing as being a good one. It is quite another to state that that one particular style of writing is the best one because every other style is guilty of conceit, obfuscation, dishonesty and what not. That is just one of the things problematic about this article. There are many other issues.
2 That said, this really is a misrepresentation of Orwell's position. Orwell was not speaking to the Americans of today. He was speaking to the people of his time. He was concerned about long-winded language in an age of not only writing but also oratory. In particular, he was pointing out that people like Gladstone (see http://en.wikisource.org/wiki/Irish_Home_Rule_Speech) who sounded like windbags sounded like that because they were, in fact, windbags.
3. That said, the article makes a very useful point that is quite contextual for our time. I have certainly seen many people pride themselves on unadorned speech as though unadorned speech was some sort of Holy Grail. It seems to satisfy their perhaps Puritanically derived zeal for simplicity. But unadorned speech is not a virtue in itself. It can easily be a means to end.
Posted by: Anand Manikutty | Feb 27, 2013 8:04:43 PM
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