August 13, 2012
Poetry in Translation: After Mohammed Iqbal
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August 13, 2012Poetry in Translation: After Mohammed IqbalA WALK IN THE SKY
I walked alone, the bewildered stars,
past day and night, circled
my journey's secret. I left the old order.
What can I tell you about Paradise,
desire's horizon? Birds in olive trees,
houris unveiled, goblets clinking.
Beyond Paradise, a place so dark
even Layla's curls would pale,
so icy, Venus herself would hide.
"What is this place?" "This is hell,"
an angel answered to my surprise.
"Here, borrowed fire creates turmoil:
those who come here are their own flame."
Translated from the Urdu by 3QD guest poet Rafiq Kathwari.
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I really like this! One question though: why insert the "Venus herself would hide" line? Checking the original "Sair-e-Falak," there doesn't seem to be any basis for it at all, whereas in the other stanzas I can see how you are working off the original imagery.
Posted by: Francesca | Aug 13, 2012 6:52:52 PM
Hmm...Let me check my original transliterations. Will revert, surely. Thank you for your kind comment, regardless.
Posted by: rmk28 | Aug 13, 2012 10:10:01 PM
Rafiq captures the hell that is Kashmir
Posted by: david barsamian | Aug 14, 2012 8:01:28 PM
Dantesque, sensuous: Hell freezes over after death. Brilliant last two lines.
Posted by: Colette Inez | Aug 22, 2012 9:39:26 AM
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