| ABOUT US | ARCHIVES | LINKS | RSS FEED | MONDAYS | |

3quarksdaily

An Eclectic Digest of Science, Art and Literature

« Re: Magnum Opus | Main | Marbles »

August 13, 2012

Poetry in Translation: After Mohammed Iqbal

 
A WALK IN THE SKY
 
I walked alone, the bewildered stars,
past day and night, circled
my journey's secret. I left the old order.
 
What can I tell you about Paradise,
desire's horizon? Birds in olive trees,
houris unveiled, goblets clinking.
 
Beyond Paradise, a place so dark
even Layla's curls would pale,
so icy, Venus herself would hide.
 
"What is this place?" "This is hell,"
an angel answered to my surprise.
"Here, borrowed fire creates turmoil:
 
those who come here are their own flame."
 
Translated from the Urdu by 3QD guest poet Rafiq Kathwari.
 

Posted by S. Abbas Raza at 12:20 AM | Permalink

Comments

I really like this! One question though: why insert the "Venus herself would hide" line? Checking the original "Sair-e-Falak," there doesn't seem to be any basis for it at all, whereas in the other stanzas I can see how you are working off the original imagery.

Posted by: Francesca | Aug 13, 2012 6:52:52 PM

Hmm...Let me check my original transliterations. Will revert, surely. Thank you for your kind comment, regardless.

Posted by: rmk28 | Aug 13, 2012 10:10:01 PM

Rafiq captures the hell that is Kashmir

Posted by: david barsamian | Aug 14, 2012 8:01:28 PM

Dantesque, sensuous: Hell freezes over after death. Brilliant last two lines.

Posted by: Colette Inez | Aug 22, 2012 9:39:26 AM

Post a comment






Subscribe to this blog's feed  

PayAnywhere with iphone credit card swiper

Android Tablet

Bluetooth Headset

2013 New Style Dresses

Compare Car Rental Prices

DHgate.com Wholesale

3QD on Facebook

3QD on Kindle

3QD by Daily Email

Receive all blogposts at the same time every day.

Enter your Email:


Preview 3QD Email

3QD on Twitter

Miscellany

Lijit Search

AddThis Social Bookmark Button

Add to Google

Recent Comments

Norman Costa on The Insanity Virus

Dave Ranning on Political Ideology and the Avoidance of Dissonance-Arousing Situations

Sundar on Quest for 'Genius Babies'?

Sundar on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

gaddeswarup on What is ‘smart’ and how does it fit our consciousness?

gaddeswarup on What is ‘smart’ and how does it fit our consciousness?

musafir on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

Lusine on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

Brad Wilson on Gezi Park

Raza Husain on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

Brad Wilson on The Insanity Virus

billy on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

rafiq on The Insanity Virus

Ben Schwartz on Here He Goes Again: Sam Harris’s Falsehoods

JonJ on Moving books

musafir on My Father: A Veteran's Story – Part 2

omar on Quest for 'Genius Babies'?

Norman Costa on My Father: A Veteran's Story

j_93 on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

jo smith on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

Dredd on Political Ideology and the Avoidance of Dissonance-Arousing Situations

Dredd on Syria: Inventing a Religious War

R. Michael on Moving books

Brad Wilson on Political Ideology and the Avoidance of Dissonance-Arousing Situations

prasad on Quest for 'Genius Babies'?

Acclaim For 3QD


"I couldn't tear myself away from 3 Quarks Daily, to the point of neglecting my work. Congratulations on this superb site."—Steven Pinker, Johnstone Professor of Psychology, Harvard University.

"I have placed 3 Quarks Daily at the head of my list of web bookmarks."—Richard Dawkins, Charles Simonyi Professor of the Public Understanding of Science at Oxford University.

"Just wanted you to know I’m one of many who reads and enjoys 3 Quarks....almost daily."—David Byrne, musician, former lead-singer of the Talking Heads, artist, intellectual.

Read more here.

The 3QD Prizes

Subscribe to this blog's feed