April 30, 2012
Monday Poem
Another Piece of Eternity
I’m peeling back a page reading a new day
by the light of a new sun
.
mom died years ago, or was it yesterday?
.
I once read something similar by Camus
but was too new to understand that time bleeds
.
its dyes are not fast but run
between years and sometimes like old cloth
the colors of time become homogenous
.
but here’s this day blaring like a fanfare
from a new horn crisp as frost on glass
its brink sharp as the edge of a blade
slicing off another piece of eternity
.
.
by Jim Culleny
4/29/12
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Comments
Nice. Thanks.
Posted by: Raza | Apr 30, 2012 8:50:51 AM
Lovely, Jim. Bravo!
Posted by: Abbas Raza | Apr 30, 2012 9:36:41 AM
The beauty of this almost kept me from noticing it, but that should be an "its" at the start of the penultimate stanza, not an "it's." A lovely Monday poem, in any case.
Posted by: Heilyn | Apr 30, 2012 9:54:26 AM
Beautiful rendtion of the fluidity of time
Posted by: Ivona Poyntz | Apr 30, 2012 9:54:47 AM
Thanks Heilyn— I actually caught the error when I posted this at my website yesterday, but copied and pasted from the uncorrected version in this morning's post here.
I always appreciate a friendly notice of typos.
Thanks again.
Posted by: Jim | Apr 30, 2012 10:10:11 AM
Its good.
Posted by: reader | Apr 30, 2012 12:45:45 PM
"but here’s this day blaring like a fanfare
from a new horn crisp as frost on glass"
This is beautiful. Wonderful imagery!
Posted by: Pepito | Apr 30, 2012 1:49:25 PM
What wonderful lines.
"but here’s this day blaring like a fanfare
from a new horn crisp as frost on glass
its brink sharp as the edge of a blade
slicing off another piece of eternity"
Thanks Jim.
Posted by: Norman Costa | Apr 30, 2012 2:56:23 PM
Super one, Jim! Shall I add the "b" just to satisfy the eagle-eyed?
Posted by: Elatia Harris | Apr 30, 2012 5:50:17 PM
"but was too new to understand that time bleeds
its dyes are not fast but run
between years and sometimes like old cloth
the colors of time become homogenous"
Beautiful.
Posted by: Maniza | Apr 30, 2012 9:48:46 PM
Really nice, Jim.
Posted by: Ruchira | May 1, 2012 12:40:25 AM
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