February 06, 2012
Monday Poem
Alarm
Wake up as much as possible
before you sleep
……............... catch
your breath while the sun’s up
when
……….in February after a snow
everything’s so soaked with light
sleep
……… is impossible
and all that’s left is to catch a day
by an hour
………………. and dance
.. ....in incandescence
forget
……….. about sleep and dreams
forget
……….. the doldrums and
wake
……….. to what the crows caw
cackling over road kill
……………… ……… wake
to the wind's insistence that
moving-on
……………….. is the way
the world works
…………….………….wake
to its
……….. alarm
.
by Jim Culleny
1/28/12
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Comments
Well done!
Posted by: Felix E F Larocca MD | Feb 6, 2012 8:05:37 AM
I like this poem. It is just right.
Posted by: Harry Walsh | Feb 6, 2012 3:21:53 PM
It's very close to perfect. for me...the enjambments are too intense, especially "sleep/catch".
Posted by: Thomas | Feb 8, 2012 11:41:47 AM
Jim,
Your best poem so far.
Posted by: Nice Nihilist | Feb 8, 2012 12:05:21 PM
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