December 05, 2011
Monday Poem
Caresses and Cuffs
Silence thick as her stews sometimes
filled my grandmother’s house
but for the cars on 15
hissing toward Picatinny
on a wet night
big black Packards or Buicks
heavy as a hard life,
Chevy’s wide whitewalls
spinning over asphalt on a two-lane
before the interstate sliced through
a table in her living room
cluttered with snaps of Jim and Jack
Howard Frank Velma Ruth
Gladys Leo Leroy Pat; the lot of them
in by-gone black and white
mugging hugging beaming being
young as they’d been for the ages
for their tiny taste of time
their vitality a temporal joke
their smooth skin taut as the sky
on a blue blue day
a pillow-piled day-bed
against the front wall under a window
kitty-corner from the brown coal stove
radiating from October
till the geometry of earth and sun
more befitted blood & breath
fat chairs stuffed as her turkeys
on big Thanksgivings
all in this mist of imagination
as real as a pin prick, as
bright and huge as a moon,
crisp as frost
—memory’s a terrible and tender thing
the way it claws and cradles the day
its shadows and light shifting
like shapes of an optical illusion
filled with mercies and accusations—
the caresses and cuffs of
the lord
by Jim Culleny
11/27/11
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Comments
Jim,
This one I enjoyed reading aloud to myself, several times. Thanks.
Posted by: Norman Costa | Dec 5, 2011 10:07:33 AM
"Tiny taste of time" is good. Not too keen on the last line. One of your best.
Posted by: Reader | Dec 5, 2011 10:07:47 AM
Reader--
Re last line. Don't take it literally —lower case utilitarian shortcut for wha?
Posted by: Jim | Dec 5, 2011 10:23:00 AM
Jim,
Ok. I just don't like the hint of religion there. But overall, a very tight and rhythmic poem. I prefer it to a lot of the poems in the New Yorker.
Posted by: Reader | Dec 5, 2011 10:34:02 AM
A stunning poem, thanks, Jim. I especially love the soupçon of religion at the end: I would call it Bressonian.
Posted by: Justin Smith | Dec 5, 2011 10:56:26 AM
I like this poem so much -- possibly a masterwork. It's the kind of poem of personal history that is a rich recalling in a language that can be shared even as it is centered. Edward Mycue
Posted by: edward mycue | Dec 5, 2011 12:26:53 PM
Really lovely, Jim!
Posted by: CJH | Dec 5, 2011 1:29:31 PM
Beautiful, Jim!
Posted by: Ruchira | Dec 5, 2011 1:37:46 PM
Cooking with gas, Jim!
Posted by: Elatia Harris | Dec 5, 2011 7:18:51 PM
I'm pleased the poem was so well received. The poem thanks you and I thank you.
Jim
Posted by: Jim | Dec 5, 2011 9:08:16 PM
I posted Jim's poem on Accidental Blogger for a discussion of religious poetry. I titled my brief article, "To Hint Of Religion, Or Not To Hint Of Religion." Also, I gave some examples of religious poems that can be appreciated, hopefully, by non-believers. You can find it at http://accidentalblogger.typepad.com/accidental_blogger/2011/12/to-hint-of-religion-or-not-to-hint-of-religion-norman-costa.html
Posted by: Norman Costa | Dec 6, 2011 2:25:30 AM
Big black Packards or Buicks
Heavy as a hard life
Charming :)
Posted by: Shahzad | Dec 6, 2011 9:54:22 AM
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