October 19, 2009
Monday Poem
memories of events they had not actually experienced.”
............................................................ –Nature News, Oct 15, 2009
Which is Which or Who is Whom
They say fruit fly brains
may be made to have memories
of where they've never flown
I’m like a fruit fly in this way
since I remember things I’m not sure
(but feel) I’ve known
events that may be dreams,
or fictions so often told
they’re recollections, or
heart-breaking tales so well rehearsed
that empathetic neurons,
like the mushroom body
of a fruit fly brain,
are excited to the point of déjà vu
remembering an explicit past not mine but
maybe one experienced by you
hours that seem like yesterday
recalled as clearly
as if each sunrise you’ve seen
had been seen by me,
each brilliant tinted crimson fall,
each blazing summer,
each fresh green spring recalled
as if they’d been interred
within a nest of neurons
dark as a womb
to be resurrected
by a universal heart
not so particular about
which is which or
who is whom
by Jim Culleny
Oct 18,2009
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Comments
The government has been able to trick humans into the same thing on a massive scale according to a world famous MIT professor with decades of tenure.
Of course he is a scientist too.
Posted by: Dredd | Oct 19, 2009 12:23:07 PM
Excellent Jim!
Thanks--
Posted by: Dave ranning | Oct 19, 2009 12:38:37 PM
Jim: I can track and appreciate your poetic offerings. You are doomed to obscurity.
Posted by: Erich | Oct 19, 2009 8:57:32 PM
Culleny you are fine poet
person thinker and philosopher
beyond heatherglow of wolfland
understanding and opposing what as Breyten Breytenbach asserts
is the damnable effort of "equating
civilization with globalization (which is but the married name of whorish expansionist capitalism)...." (in the sept 09 Harper's Magazine). yr a brother i look forward to reading weekly. thank you for also choosing so many fine poems from all over the diverse languages of the world that have been put into english.
edward mycue
Posted by: Edward Mycue | Oct 19, 2009 11:43:03 PM
Thank you Edward. Gonna have to research your citations --my ignorance is great.
BTW, just went to your site to check it out. I shall return.
And Eric, obscurity is much maligned. Glenn Beck and Rush Limbaugh are not obscure, for instance; their meaning is plain.
Or maybe you meant obscurity in the sense of living below the radar. If so, ditto.
Intellectual seepage while not as quick as a blow to the head can sometimes be effective.
Posted by: Jim | Oct 20, 2009 7:32:20 AM
Eric, it just occured to me that what you may be saying is that since you can track and appreciate my poems, I must be doomed to obscurity, which reminds me of the Woody Allen line: “I'd never join a club that would allow a person like me to become a member.”
Posted by: Jim | Oct 20, 2009 7:41:39 AM
He's dead, Jim. The person who actually said the line you quote: Groucho! (No?)
I also interpreted Eric (he can correct us both, of course!) as you did in your second comment. I.e., as a compliment to you.
Posted by: Abbas Raza | Oct 20, 2009 2:48:24 PM
Oh, it was Groucho. Thanks Abbas.
I didn't dig deeply enough. I found a reference to Allen, but just looked again. It was Woody quoting Groucho.
Posted by: Jim | Oct 20, 2009 3:07:58 PM
Oh, and Dredd, yes, right on.
Posted by: Jim | Oct 20, 2009 7:25:17 PM
Eric's compliment is gracious, indeed. I would have written it myself, if I could turn a phrase so finely. Because Jim, I am not much of a poetry buff but I too appreciate and track your poems.
Posted by: Ruchira | Oct 20, 2009 7:44:27 PM
I unwittingly listened to Pink Floyd's "Us and Them" just a couple of hours after reading this poem. How apropos and beautiful that I'd chance to experience both in one day.
Posted by: Heilyn | Jun 29, 2011 2:39:43 AM
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