January 26, 2009
Obama’s Inaugural Speech: A Post-Mortem Puzzle
Michael Blim
As Washington picked itself up and dusted itself off after
the country’s most expensive inaugural ever, I searched myself to understand
why my enthusiasm for Obama and his mission had slipped a notch or two. The
event had been flawlessly executed, save for the faux pas of Chief Justice Roberts. The media had followed the
Obama-administration inspired script that a new American electoral majority for
good, many-faced and many-raced, had finally emerged to put several generations
of poisoned, partisan, and reactionary politics behind us.
There was also abundant external evidence of the Inauguration’s success. Almost two thirds of those who watched the inaugural ceremonies told pollsters that they felt better, more optimistic, about America afterwards. USA Today and the Gallup Poll found that 46% of those who heard the inaugural address thought it excellent, and another 35% found it good. That’s about an A- as a grade average. Thus far, three million have watched Tuesday’s inaugural address on You Tube.
It didn’t work for me.
Why?
First, I do not think, in contrast to the view of many, that President Obama is a great orator. His voice works no siren sound on me. I don’t find myself getting stirred, or for that matter, find myself comfortably awash in vocal sonorities, the way I do, say, when I listen to recordings of speeches by Franklin Roosevelt or Winston Churchill. Think of the great voices of the Anglo-American theatre like James Earle Jones, John Gielgud, Laurence Olivier, and then think of Obama’s. The comparison is not felicitous. He sings no melody as might Gielgud, opens no pauses in the thought as does Jones, nor does he press himself upon you through simple elocution as did the great Olivier.
Second, Obama’s manner of speaking relies on cadence, rather than melody. In fact, his voice is rather monotonic, and he resorts to flatten phrase sentence endings tonically as if he enjoys taking the air out of the sentence he is airing. Occasionally he will rely on cadence, using its repetition to build an idea. He may add as he did on Tuesday a breathy, aspirated quality as if forcing his air through a slightly gauzy filter while letting his pitch rise with each new phrase. Though the repetition is a preacher’s tactic, the breathiness, unfortunately for me, is pure Garrison Keeler.
Perhaps more use of the technique would have produced more
reaction in his listeners, but real success would have rested on the
combination of a vocal manipulation and the idea for instance of inspiration.
Obama was giving lessons: “we are this,” “we are that,” and so on. He was not
painting word-pictures. His notable reference to slavery was reduced to twelve
words: “they … endured the last of the whip and plowed the hard earth.”
Perhaps, “they” also endured rape and concubinage, slave auctions, secret
schooling, runaways, little revolts, and finally liberation, however blighted.
Instead of attaching America’s redemption to the complex of human actions,
slave labor is compared schematically in the same sentence with settling the
West (where were the Indians?), crossing the oceans and fighting wars. Instead
of invoking history, Obama find the very thin common ground that figures
effort, whether compelled or offered freely, comparable because it all
contributed to the birth of the nation.
Thus, Obama puts these instances together to underscore America’s simple (not to say simple-minded) belief in itself as engaged in a journey of national greatness.
The speech, then, was something of a listing in relaxed
order of America’s strengths, all of which led in recursive fashion to a
conclusion not unlike the old World War II diddy that “we did it before and we
can do it again.” This rather banal sort of reassurance is elevated some,
however, by Obama’s resort to claiming that our habits are indeed virtues. Our
“hard work and honesty, courage and fair play, tolerance and curiosity, loyalty
and patriotism” are the truth of us. If we can recover these essential American
virtues and apply them to ourselves and to our relations with others, then
freedoms with both its ethical and material gifts shall be delivered safely
again to a new generation.
It is a speech, I feel compelled to say, of shallow
convictions. It demands nothing more of us than re-dedication to the task at
hand, our values if honored sufficient for our labors.
Why are we here? Why before this abyss? Why in the midst of the greatest economic crisis since the Second World War, now sixty and some years ago? What must we do?
Paul Krugman (New York Times, 1/23/09) had it right when he noticed that President Obama had spread
the blame around: suddenly we were all to blame in part for the mess we now are
in, and as Krugman notes, Obama resorted to the “we’re–all-at-fault,
let’s-get-tough-on-ourselves boilerplate.” There were the greedy, but all we
like sheep…
Neither Lincoln nor Roosevelt would have started there or left us there. For both, there were “whats” and “whys,” that were important to establish as fact to both indicate direction and justify future action. What has happened, must we do, and why?
Lincoln in his second inaugural address is unsparing in his
insistence that “slaves constituted a peculiar and powerful interest,” and “all
knew that this interest was, somehow, the cause of the war.” He fears that that
“this terrible war” may, if God wills, “continue, until all the wealth piled by
the bondman’s two hundred and fifty years of unrequited toil shall be sunk, and
until every drop of blood drawn with the lash, shall be paid by another drawn
with the sword.” Yet he asks the nation to act ”with malice toward none,” and
“with charity for all,” in creating a just and lasting peace.
Here we have an argument complete that drives emotion deep into the heart of reason. A motive for change, or more accurately perhaps, for national transformation has been given.
President Obama, Krugman believes, follows Keynes in noting
how our capacities to sustain our lives remain even if the economic system that
facilitates exchange has broken down. I rather think, however, that Obama looks
back to Roosevelt’s first inaugural speech where the first rhetorical gambit is
to separate our productive capacities and will from the economic system that
then strangled it:
“Yet our distress comes from no failure of substance. We are stricken by no plague of locusts. Compared with the perils, which our forefathers conquered because they believed and were not afraid, we have still much to be thankful for. Nature still offers her bound and human efforts have multiplied it. Plenty is at our doorstep, but a generous use of it languishes in the very sight of the supply. Primarily this is because the rules of the exchange of mankind’s goods have failed, through their own stubbornness and their own incompetence, have admitted their failure, and abdicated. Practices of the unscrupulous money changers stand indicted in the court of public opinion, rejected by the hearts and minds of men. … They know only the rules of a generation of self-seekers.”
Moreover, Roosevelt believes that the people shall be as a
“great army … dedicated to a disciplined attack upon our common problems.”
And here, perhaps, lies another of the problems revealed in the Obama inaugural speech, and one of the conundrums he must solve to secure some success.
Both Roosevelt and Lincoln, I suggest, not only tell
Americans what is wrong, and why it is wrong, but also what must be done. They
also suggest what we must do. We must form an army of peacemakers, says Lincoln
in 1865; an army to support Roosevelt’s programs, Roosevelt says in 1933.
What must we do, one would like to ask President Obama, to transform America, as Lincoln asks, or to support even emergency action to save the nation, as Roosevelt speculates may at the end be necessary?
Obama implies that America must change dramatically, but
that those changes will be consonant with our tried and true values (those
noted above). And this is where Obama being Obama in our time may blind him and
obscure for others the deeper dimensions of our current dilemma.
Obama is a charismatic figure, non pareil. It derives not from his rhetoric, which I argue above is not as extraordinary as advertised, but from his presence. He fulfills our wish that our values be true, and that we are who we want to believe we are – those virtues he praises throughout the inaugural address. Following charisma’s original exponent, Max Weber, charisma is a virtue not the possession of the charismatic, but an attribute in fact that is a gift to the figure in whom we confer it. And so with Obama: he is the receptacle, (or vessel as he put it himself in an early New Yorker profile) of Americans’ desire to be both righteous and true.
On inaugural day, Obama offered himself as living proof. Obama’s father might have been denied service at a lunch counter 60 years ago, but his son is now president. Via his person, Obama finds the nation’s emotional bedrock, but at the expense of not realizing that his charisma is one thus far of redemption or national affirmation, rather than of change or transformation. In fact, I am arguing above that he has not yet shown an awareness that his charisma, though honestly acquired through the lottery of national self-affirmation, must be gambled on changes equivalent to those that both Lincoln and Roosevelt saw as the imperatives of their times.
I hope that he be able to say as Roosevelt at his second
inaugural did that:
“we have made the exercise of all power more democratic; for we have begun to bring private autocratic powers into their proper subordination to the public’s government. The legend that they were invincible – above and beyond the processes of a democracy – has been shattered. They have been challenged and beaten.” (January 20, 1937)
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Well argued as always, Michael -- but by the time he got to the speech I was so relieved my concentration was destroyed.
Posted by: Elatia Harris | Jan 26, 2009 12:54:00 AM
I too was disappointed by some of Obama's soaring 'American Narrative'. How often are the sacrifices of America's Native population forgotten?
Posted by: Daniel Rourke | Jan 26, 2009 2:01:24 AM
By your ommission, Martin Luther King, Jr. does not produce the requisite response either.
Neither does Malcolm X.
Barack was not trying to soar that day. Are you saying he never does?
Posted by: Stephen Rose | Jan 26, 2009 6:17:56 AM
I certainly found myself inspired by the rhetoric of both King and Malcolm X. The comparison I used today for Obama the president are presidents, or Churchill, last century's honorary American president. I used actors to describe vocal characteristics that are almost universally recognized by English speakers.
I don't agree with your estimate of his rhetorical ntentions on Inauguration Day. There were soaring images, allusions, and inspirational phrases galore on the page, but little issued forth in his presentation.
As to never, Obama's Philadelphia speech definitely took flight, precisely because he spoke directly of the whats and the whys of racism in America with unmistakable clarity and with conviction.
Therein, I think, lies a lesson. When people talk of empty rhetoric, they are identifying a rhetoric reduced to effects, a performance that seeks its own perfection rather than engages its listeners in an argument about truth and ultimately about what must be done.
Obama must use the gift of charisma we have given him to lead us out of what we know and believe now rather than back to where we have been. If he does not seek to transform, he risks becoming a narcissistic reflection of America's flawed fantasy of itself, and at best yet another celebrity King. If our world turns truly sour, he risks general disillusion, and the furies unleashed when the hopes and desires of his believers are dashed.
This is why, as Max Weber argued, charisma is both gift and burden. And it is so no less for Obama now.
Thank you for your comment. Michael Blim
Posted by: michael blim | Jan 26, 2009 7:19:17 AM
When it comes to great voices, how about Dylan Thomas or Paul Robeson? But those guys were not presidents...
FDR great speaking voice but speeches not that grand. Lincoln, from reports, no great speaking voice but of course great speeches.
another distinction: speeches written by the speaker and not by a speech writer. Speeches that sound truly great but offer not very much in substance.
Posted by: fred lapides | Jan 26, 2009 9:30:11 AM
Obama’ Inaugural speech was inspiring and was flawlessly executed. The economic speeches given by him was inspiring and optimistic. This adoption was taken from David Korten. Watch a short movie of David for more insight of his collections.
Posted by: Fernando | Jan 26, 2009 9:33:04 AM
I have to say I agree. But I was looking to feel fabulous that day and so I took it that way. And I think Americans like those feel good moments. Who doesn't? And it was their feel good day!! And like how!! Obama's speech on a feel good day--was a feel good moment. Anything else would have been blown out of proportion as a "threat" to America. Please keep in mind that 47% of the electorate did not vote for Mr. Obama. They voted for the other guy--even under the present circumstances. That's saying alot. That's pretty damn scarey. For me the most important part of the speech was the promise for the restoration of the principle which has been overturned in the last 8 years "The rule of Law" and is the key reason for the collapse of the financial system, the economy and America's standing and the violence that has been unleashed upon the world "Our founding fathers faced with perils that we can scarcely imagine, drafted a charter to assure the rule of law and the rights of man, a charter expanded by the blood of generations.Those ideals still light the world, and we will not give them up for expedience's sake."
That's it. That's the promise--that's the M.O. The speech did that.
My toes were frozen by the time this sentence came around--but I heard it loud and clear as did the weeping crowd around me.
Will we be disappointed? We should all behave like we will be disappointed so that we can make sure that we aren't and that we hold him to this speech.. But in the moment--frozen toes adn thawing heart and all----it was a great huge moment.
Posted by: maniza | Jan 26, 2009 11:01:40 AM
Way back when, Obama addressed the congregation of Dr. King's church, and he got to me in a big way. After that, I decided I needed to listen in on his speeches sparingly, and read the texts instead of being enraptured by streaming video, unable to think anything other than oh, yes-yes-yes, that's my president... I was actually frightened of how good he sounded, so vast was our need for a just and reflective leader. And, except for his speech on race and his acceptance speech at the DNC, I read rather than listened and watched. It was a good thing to do because it made me sure of him.
But Michael, that's quite a paragraph in your own comment about what must not happen now. I couldn't agree more.
Posted by: Elatia Harris | Jan 26, 2009 11:31:16 AM
To be honest, I didn't hear his speech, I was hiking up on Mt Tam. I must be isolated from the passions of "My Fellow Americans".
But it is great to have a slim, black, articulate leader during this mass extinction, even if confronting the actual problems are not politically or socially possible.
But I'll keep up the good fight.
Posted by: Dave Ranning | Jan 26, 2009 12:24:01 PM
“The rules of the exchange of mankind’s goods have failed” –FDR
This could be mistaken for a prophetic axiom. Too bad Roosevelt didn’t have the internet; he could have at least implemented a non-monetary form of exchange through the development of internet trading software - you choose who you want to perform a task for based on what that person is contributing, thus completing a giant web of a sovereign village. Unscrupulous money managers would have nothing to be scrupulous about!
One good thing to note is FDR would not get away with saying the words in his day: “We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus and non-believers." But I am still partial in how Ghandi put it: "I am a Hindu and a Muslim and a Christian and a Jew" He was light years ahead.
It must be overwhelming for a president elect to be introduced to a global apparatus of monetary gods.
Posted by: Mark Stenekes | Jan 26, 2009 3:48:52 PM
Well, it may be true that Obama is no Lincoln or Roosevelt -- surprise, surprise. But psychologists have the concept of a "good-enough parent," and I think we can at least hope that Obama is a "good-enough president" for this time.
In the days of Lincoln and perhaps also of FDR, the stirring oratory of the leader was probably an important causative factor in moving the country in the right direction. But today, I think, the force of the media, including the Internet, and the complexity of the society are too great to be dominated by one person, even if he is the head of the executive branch of the federal government.
Salvation at this point, if we can manage it, will require many kinds of changes in our economic system and national psychology, some rather deep and far-reaching, and it's doubtful that Obama, intelligent as he is, understands everything that will be needed and, even if he could understand all of what's needed, could communicate all of it to the public. It will take efforts by many people on many fronts.
And in fact, if I recall correctly, that's one of the points he made in that speech: he can't do it all himself; everyone will have to work together.
Posted by: JonJ | Jan 26, 2009 9:16:03 PM
Sam Leith on Obama’s Oratory:
www.ft.com/cms/s/2/acef9222-e35a-11dd-a5cf-0000779fd2ac.html
Posted by: Joe Williams | Jan 27, 2009 4:40:23 PM
So dire the dearth of sentience and mess of mis-enunciation in the doofus departed, the stark contrast of hearing a simple sentence spoken completely, let alone by its author, came as wind under the ineffable wings of joy.
I didn't listen, but later in the day watched the last hour of the Inaugural Parade. I read the Speech transcript and that worked for me. I kindly wish this post were on tape.
The first sentence set me begrudging reading the rest, for its flimsy guffaw against fact:
The media myth about the cost of Obama's inauguration, by Eric Boehlert, Jan 17, 2009.
It seems fully doubted that President Obama senses the extent his words must go to meet their truth.
As if Things Weren't Bad Enough, Russian Professor Predicts End of U.S., By ANDREW OSBORN, DECEMBER 29, 2008.
And if Obama does sense it, beyond any ken Abe or FDR or both combined imagined, indeed -- the end of our petroleum-production Economy, and that end of dollar-denominated commerce then ending sovereign nationalisms broke down into vicinity affinities -- it seems duly predictable that the Free Press might insensate the news, with hypnosis by non-news novocaine.
LET THE MEDIA MANIPULATION BEGIN, By Ashley Glacel, 10.27.04.
But he's president, I'm not, I'm just glad he don't talk in patois.
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