December 01, 2008
Monday Poem
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Kneedeep as Leaves
Jim Culleny
Today, in a java shop
among caffeinators, wired, I
received a poem from a friend
whom I've known since
it didn't seem important
to understand friendship
But now I do
and appreciate his calling me
into the world of this poem
(which is not his, but his
anyway because
he saw some truth in it
and supposed that
I might see it too)
With thanks I add it to
other truths that have blown against my door
now piled kneedeep as leaves,
but less brittle, in fall
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Comments
This is not credible poetry, this was just plain terrible
Posted by: edoliver | Dec 1, 2008 11:51:58 AM
Limerick for the Critterick
Into my life like loud thunder
Awful, he cried, what a blunder
Yet leaves of rapport
I could not ignore
Jim's verse of mutual wonder.
Posted by: CriticalMassI | Dec 1, 2008 4:37:59 PM
"To escape criticism: do nothing, say nothing, be nothing."
Elbert Hubbard
Posted by: Jared | Dec 1, 2008 9:52:08 PM
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