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November 10, 2008

Monday Poem

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The Hunter
Jim CullenyImage_orion

I hike up a hill at a clip
just to keep this heart alive.

The Hunter’s over my left shoulder
with arms raised, always
in his almost-never-ending black
place in the sky surrounded by
blazing stars in utter space.

Skirting single Cheryl’s
I wonder again, what is it she does.
In summer her shingled ranch
is ablaze with lilies.
She works them with a goofy hat
stopping now and then to swab sweat.

I watch while beyond the blue
Orion stands with his legs apart.
“I’ll live near forever,” he mocks,
and his belt-stars testify.

I pick the pace up now and feel
the suck of cool air into my lungs.

At the hill’s top, the road’s crown
is the pate of a disturbed
menace standing; straining
beneath asphalt; bending it up.

A cleat-pocked phone pole’s
draped lifeline-wires
disappear into the dark.

An old sugar maple’s there too,
its cleft bark bathed in amber sodium vapor,
bare limbs a wild, strobed lattice
moving at my pace as I pass.

While the Hunter in the background,
knees ever sprung for action
perseverates for years and years,
I whistle past the graveyard popping Lipitor.

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Posted by Jim Culleny at 09:49 AM | Permalink

Comments

Thanks, Jim. I like the rhythmic language. It's very musical.

Posted by: Jared | Nov 10, 2008 11:52:09 AM

Very visual, nice work.

KAS

Posted by: KAS | Nov 10, 2008 1:34:25 PM

The repetition of the adjectives reminds me of a L Ron Hubbard book. However, I appreciate the discursive narrative and disassociations.

Posted by: Mark Elliot Cullen | Nov 12, 2008 12:47:57 PM

I really like this poem, about things that remain for millions of years, while other things wither and pass...

Posted by: aguy109 | Nov 12, 2008 2:56:59 PM

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